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Pencil, Pencil in your stand
Smoothest ebony in my hand
Tell my dreams, create my myths
A graphite diamond in my grip
Hexagonal beauty tall and fine
Carve my vision from just one line
Blankest page of purest white
Stands no chance against your might
When my mind is clouded and blue
The only thing I need is you
You soothe my pain and heal my wounds
Fascinated my hand moves
Deepest trance and sweetest bliss
As I watch the sharp'ner twist
And once again you are renewed
Till I need you again to lift my mood
well I was bored and had a huge migrain which I decided I needed to take my mind off literally!!!! So I was looking through the gallery over at :iconlive-love-write: and I came across this [link] so I decided to give it a try and so Pencil was born!!!!! :la:

as per let me know if there is anything you think coud be improved :)
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rataafalava Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thank you for the the read. it was great!
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Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it :D and thanks for the :+fav: too
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rataafalava Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
you are very welcome. i hope many more people get to read this.
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Starija Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Writer
"You sooth my pain and heal my wounds"
i don't know if you intentionally left the word like that, or if you didn't know, but.. looking the word 'sooth' up, it seems it's more of a noun than verb, which is what your context is supposed to be. so it should be 'soothe', rather than 'sooth'.

anyway, i don't wanna leave that as my only comment to this lovely poem, so i'm just gonna say this was really unique.
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Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aha yes it is meant to be 'soothe' my spelling sometimes is just atrotious lol so thank you very much for picking that up and taking the time to comment :)
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Starija Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Student Writer
lol you're welcome. i think everyone's forgetful of that occasionally in their life.
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Starija Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Writer
bah, i didn't even define soothe. i'm sure you know it; it's the verb form of sooth.
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Lolli333 Featured By Owner May 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
fauhiuf I LOVE IT! It's amazing :D
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Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
awwww thank you so much :huggle:
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conniekidd Featured By Owner May 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful poem! I absolutely love this!~ <3
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