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Pencil, Pencil in your stand
Smoothest ebony in my hand
Tell my dreams, create my myths
A graphite diamond in my grip
Hexagonal beauty tall and fine
Carve my vision from just one line
Blankest page of purest white
Stands no chance against your might
When my mind is clouded and blue
The only thing I need is you
You soothe my pain and heal my wounds
Fascinated my hand moves
Deepest trance and sweetest bliss
As I watch the sharp'ner twist
And once again you are renewed
Till I need you again to lift my mood
well I was bored and had a huge migrain which I decided I needed to take my mind off literally!!!! So I was looking through the gallery over at :iconlive-love-write: and I came across this [link] so I decided to give it a try and so Pencil was born!!!!! :la:

as per let me know if there is anything you think coud be improved :)
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:iconrataafalava:
rataafalava Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thank you for the the read. it was great!
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Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it :D and thanks for the :+fav: too
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:iconrataafalava:
rataafalava Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
you are very welcome. i hope many more people get to read this.
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Starija Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Writer
"You sooth my pain and heal my wounds"
i don't know if you intentionally left the word like that, or if you didn't know, but.. looking the word 'sooth' up, it seems it's more of a noun than verb, which is what your context is supposed to be. so it should be 'soothe', rather than 'sooth'.

anyway, i don't wanna leave that as my only comment to this lovely poem, so i'm just gonna say this was really unique.
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:iconlex-logan:
Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aha yes it is meant to be 'soothe' my spelling sometimes is just atrotious lol so thank you very much for picking that up and taking the time to comment :)
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Starija Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Student Writer
lol you're welcome. i think everyone's forgetful of that occasionally in their life.
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Starija Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Writer
bah, i didn't even define soothe. i'm sure you know it; it's the verb form of sooth.
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Lolli333 Featured By Owner May 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
fauhiuf I LOVE IT! It's amazing :D
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:iconlex-logan:
Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
awwww thank you so much :huggle:
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:iconconniekidd:
conniekidd Featured By Owner May 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful poem! I absolutely love this!~ <3
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:iconlex-logan:
Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
wow thank you soooooo much it means alot :D :tighthug:
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:iconconniekidd:
conniekidd Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You are most welcome ^^ :hug:
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analillithbar Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconwritingplz:
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:iconlex-logan:
Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for requesting to show my work in your Gallery :D
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analillithbar Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
;)
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smyli12 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011
I love this. Drawing makes me feel the same way :)
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:iconlex-logan:
Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
awsome!!! and thanks :huggle: It's nice to know there are people out there that get that same feeling :D
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AstronomicalTwilight Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely poem, :heart:
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:iconlex-logan:
Lex-Logan Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks you so much :D and thanks loads for the :+fav:
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AstronomicalTwilight Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. =)
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Pencil-Stencil Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is brilliant :heart: do you mind if i save it to my pc, don't worry i won't steal it or abuse it :XD: it's just so beautiful and so true :heart:
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Lex-Logan Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah that's fine I'm so over the moon that you like it :heart: thanks for the :+fav: :tighthug:
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Pencil-Stencil Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're most welcome :heart: i love it! :D :blowkiss:
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arcticrob Featured By Owner May 15, 2011
absolutely beautiful! :aww:
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:iconlex-logan:
Lex-Logan Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you sooooo much :huggle:
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Ray-K Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! I now feel inclined to sit and explore the contours of my pencils, even though I don't draw much. :D Very sweet and thoughtful poem, about something which we take for granted. :)
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Lex-Logan Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow thank you I'm so happy my poem made you feel like that :woohoo: and thanks loads for the :+fav: :tighthug:
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Ray-K Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a great little poem :D You are welcome, it was my pleasure! :tighthug:
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Lex-Logan Featured By Owner May 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug: :love:
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CaringheartTTR Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful poem :heart:
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:iconlex-logan:
Lex-Logan Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you and super thank you for the :+fav: :icontardglompplz:
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CaringheartTTR Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome :).
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Paintsmudger Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Delightful!
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:iconlex-logan:
Lex-Logan Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :D and thank you lots for the :+fav: :tighthug:
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Paintsmudger Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
You be welcome!
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Lilinete-the-Ghost Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Student General Artist
This is great!
I love this a lot!
Great job!
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:iconlex-logan:
Lex-Logan Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
wow thank you so much :dance: and thanks loads for the :+fav:
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Lilinete-the-Ghost Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Student General Artist
:D You're welcome
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Cataclysm-X Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Hi! I featured your beautiful poem in my latest news article, which can be found here.

I hope you don't mind :blowkiss: have a beautiful weekend!
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Lex-Logan Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Mind? MIND!?!?!?!?! I love you! :giggle: thank you so much for featuring me you really have made my weekend :tighthug::tighthug::tighthug: and thank you for :+fav:ing also :love:
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Cataclysm-X Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
teehee I'm very happy you like it then :D
And you're certainly most welcome, though I gotta be the one to thank you for writing this beautiful <3
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Lex-Logan Featured By Owner May 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: I really am flattered thank you once again for featuring my piece :love: :tighthug:
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011   Writer
:+fav:
Really good poem. I've never thought about a pencil quite so much.
I find this as humorous and yet 'deep' as any good, light (even romantic) verse should be. Thank you.
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Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for the feedback it really means alot that you like it :D and thanks for the :+fav: :glomp:
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011   Writer
:iconcopterglomp1plz::iconcopterglomp2plz: ... :iconyourewelcomesignplz:
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DianeCrow Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
Lol, at least we know there are people out there who truly appreciate pencils :XD:
It was a nice read, good job! :D
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:iconlex-logan:
Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the comment :) I prefer drawing in pencil to anything else I guess there is just nothing like it :D thank you very much for the :+fav: too it means alot :glomp:
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DianeCrow Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
I prefer the pencil too :meow:
you're welcome! it was no biggie :hug:
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ViralEnvy Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVE LOVE LOVE!
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Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! :glomp: thanks for the fav too hun :love:
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